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March 24, 2016 | Author: | Posted in business, mathematics and economics

The presentation was intended to discuss my most admired person born outside the United States , and I have chosen Kun Hee Lee , the CEO of Samsung Corporation . My admiration of Kun Hee Lee stems from the fact that he possesses fearless leadership , exercises quality management with passion , and has exemplary skills of getting the right people on the bus ‘ i .e . selecting the most competent employees

The content of the presentation was comprehensive and encompassed a brief yet thorough explanation of Kun Hee Lee Kim ‘s positive traits that are worth emulating [banner_entry_middle]

. These include his penchant for quality control which resulted in a 3 billion dollar net profit for Samsung ‘s telecommunication division by 2002 , and a substantial growth in revenue from 230million dollars to 15 billion dollars . One other reason which has been expounded on by the speaker is his talent in recruiting the best employees , further reinforcing his success as an executive . Both items have been discussed comprehensively citing pertinent facts from literature . I have also made efforts to ensure that the words used are appropriate for each portion being discussed – but this still needs to be significantly improved . In terms of content , it would be better if the conclusion was elaborated on further

I think that the choice of the has been done prudently , and it is an apt to present . The organization of the presentation has also been undertaken systematically , and it is apparent that an outline with clear thoughts has been used in making the presentation . While the content is commendable , I think there are several points to improve on in terms of style . One strength is the effort to maintain eye contact with the audience throughout the presentation . However , I should show more confidence and credibility by improving my rigid posture . The voice volume should also be improved , with proper intonation , inflection and accent at points of emphasis so that the audience may not be bored Because of this point of improvement , it seemed like I was reading a manuscript instead of delivering a presentation in a lively and animated manner . Pronunciation should likewise be improved to facilitate understanding by the audience since I am a non-native speaker . All these may be significantly improved by trying to interact more frequently with native speakers to have more venues for using the English language

In conclusion , the presentation was commendable in terms of content with very little need for improvement in the conclusion portion . On the other hand , the manner of delivery – including voice volume , intonation pronunciation , accent , and confidence must be enhanced . Eye contact is already satisfactory… [banner_entry_footer]

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